Matthew, are you looking for a hookline in terms of singable melody or for the lyrics or both?

Yes to both. And even restructuring, if necessary, to match lyrics. I just ran out of inspiration. The original lyrics were... umm... less than inspiring. I can't even remember what they were, but I remember sitting at my recorder, looking at the sheet of paper in front of me, humming, and saying aloud to myself "This is crap" and giving up :)

Thanks for the compliment!

--
Matthew P. Barnson